Changes to script structure:

Opening- scene one:

• Auroras dream sequence in field
• wakes up in rehab room

Scene two:

• Rehab staff room
• Marissa's conversation about new protocols "no touching patients" to max
• Phillip walks in as she leaves 
• conversation with Max about work and some patients before Phillip heads to morning group session

Scene three:

• Aurora alone in rehab room- huddled and withdrawn in corner of bed
• nurse enters, has encouraging conversation with Aurora to bring her into group session
• conversation hints at how long Auroras been there
• Aurora hesitantly goes with her- they leave room

Scene Four:

• Phillips group session os underway in the common room/lounge
• Patient, Ben, is at the tail end of his "story" is interupted with Auroras arrival
• Phillip feels instant attraction- "love at first sight"
• Aurora is encouraged to sit and share "her story" she bars up- runs away back into her isolation? maybe Phillip goes after her she passes him a note through door? 
• also need to introduce phillips cellphone in this scene...

OR

• Phillips group session os underway in the common room/lounge
• Patient, Ben, is at the tail end of his "story" is interupted with Auroras arrival
• Phillip looks at her with caring loving eyes and welcomes her with a charming smile (helped look after her at her worse sate and feel in love with her then- possible small flashback)
• Aurora is seated and asked to share her story she try's but is mute- struggles to speak
• scene is interrupted with Phillips cellphone call (needs to be a losely relevant conversation- maybe something to do with the lost wife??)
• Aurora takes notice of cellphone
• also need to include Phillips sympathy toward Auroras strugle of speech

Scene Five:

• Aurora awakens in her rehab room- it is late at night 
• a small parcel is siting on her bedside table
• she grabs it and a small note falls saying "I hope you can use this to find your words again- Phillip" it is a journal and pen 
• Aurora starts writing- flashbacks about her past life- don't show her addiction to internet just yet leave it as a unknown substance addiction

Scene Six:

• hint at days/weeks have gone by
• Aurora sits in the common room slightly removed and writing in her journal 
• more memories
• phillip is in group session but his eye keeps wondering in her direction
• she catches his eye as she continues to write away
• also echo of "hands" that Aurora refers to in her journal- visual link

Scene Seven:

• Rehab hallway night, Phillip is doing his rounds
• Pauses outside Auroras Door before heading off for his break
• goes into office and shuffles trough papers and file before sitting down

Scene Eight:

• Aurora awakens from another dream
• she hears muffled sounds of someone crying she gets out of bed to investigate
• she reaches the office where Phillip is- Phillip turns around with tears in his eyes
• Aurora wants to comfort him with words but still unable to speak she looks at phillips belt where is cellphone is and desperately reaches to grab it 
• there is a struggle between Phillip and Aurora he grabs her then she seizes up and faints
• Phillip carefully picks her up and carries her away heading back towards her room
• he places her on her bed pulls the blankets around her then softly kisses her before turning to leave
• Aurora awakens and looks in his direction as the door closes behind him

Scene Nine: same time as scene eight

• Max passing through hallway stops outside Auroras slightly open door and witnesses Phillips kiss with Aurora

Scene Ten:

• Phillip closes Aurora's door, turns and continues down the hallway
• max follows Phillip before grabbing his arm to confront him
• Phillip turns- gets slightly angry but never admits he was in the wrong
• Max informs Phillip that he has to report him, turns and leaves Phillip standing in the hallway

Scene Eleven:

• Marissa's in her office swamped with papers- there is a knock
• Phillip enters
• Marisssa says max saw her
• Phillip justifies why he did it with no regrets
• Phillip is put on leave (possibly put a time on  it so there is reference to time period)

Scene Twelve:

• Aurora sits in her room (day and warmer lighting) narration of her "awakening" 
• Max come into room 
• Aurora speaks for the first time
• Max tells her of Phillips story
• montage and flashback as Max talks- also cuts to scene twelve through out scene
• max leaves Aurora in her room thinking (slightly more darker lighting again)

Scene Thirteen: same time as scene twelve

• Phillip walks towards duck pond 
• he sits and has a reflective moment
• pulls engagement ring out of pocket and holds in palm of his hand
• thinks
• then throws the ring into the pond before turning to leave

Scene Fourteen: 

• Late at night , Aurora is awake in her room waiting
• Phillip is on night duty he sees that Aurora is awke
• enters room notices journal is full
• she looks up at him and speaks "I'm not going to end up like her- I need your help"

Scene Fifteen:

• Cut to Phillip unlocking office door, they both enter the room glows blue from the light of the computer
• Aurora hesitates over the key board
• Phillip steps in and logs her into the internet
• She connects to her multiple profiles and pushes “Delete All”
• The window flicker across screen and automatically shut down
• Auroras hand twitches at her side as she stands by Phillip watching her online life erase away
• She slowly links her fingers between Phillips fingers (first self initiated human contact) 

END